Still life comments please

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Still life comments please

Postby shutter » Thu Apr 28, 2016 8:05 pm

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I took this still life in a restaurant comments please mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Re: Still life comments please

Postby Fogey » Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:06 am

An interesting concept and composition.
I'm not sure about the angle of shot, however. The overhead view returns a very flat image and I do wonder whether a lower viewpoint would have been better, giving more depth to the scene.

I do like the impression of the fork, and the framing of the photograph - shows inventiveness.

As an aside, were the restaurant staff upset with the state of the table? :lol:
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